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Wednesday, July 6, 2016

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writing blog comment before and after




this week we have been learning to write quality blog comments use the key three. here is my before and after




BEFORE-

my comment has no greeting or the key three!




AFTER-



this comment has capital letters a greeting and the key three

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  1. AnonymousJuly 8, 2016 at 10:25 AM

    Hi Emily its Sharney looks like you have done a big improve here is my blog http://hpssharneyk.blogspot.co.nz/ hope you like it

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