Port hills Fire recount

Today I am going to share my port hills fire. The purpose of my writing is to entertain you.

This is it a couple of days ago and when the fire is in action.
terrifying huge fire

When I first got home I looked out the front window and all i could see is grey clouds of smoke. My heart raced. My mum and dad were talking about it being near Haswell. My aunty lived in haswell.

I went outside to hang the togs out. The sky above me whipped with the sounds of helicopters.I was wondering what caused it.

i went to bed that night and  all I could think of was “is it coming closer to us?” But when i woke up in the morning and looked out my window, thankfully, it wasn't close.  I felt terrible  for all those people who lived there and glad that none of our family was involved.

I got ready for school fairly quickly hoping that when I got  to school It wouldn't  be near there. After lunch I went Inside and could smell the grey and dusty smoke. Jorja And ashrita, Jas and I went outside and could smell lots of smoke.  I was hoping that everyone could breath.

today there is still coal around. I am so glad that it is out and I feel so sorry for those who live there.

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