My best friend is Jasmine.She is really funny. She is fun to be around and is really cool. I think she is the best. her faviorte colours are blue and dark pink.
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Thats a good story Emily but you have to change the bit when it says she is you put is in 2 times.
ReplyDeleteI like how you explain about your friend
ReplyDeleteI like how your friend smiles.
ReplyDeleteHey Emily its like you know so much about Jasmine.
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